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chris · Post by **chris** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 9:07 am

I have to say i think that heavy music is just that heavy music weather it be death,black,core,thrash or what ever be that it is not seen like that I myself like metalcore music and that is what my band is and are proud of it. I can very well play straight metal, death or whatever but i choose metalcore cause it's my cup of tea. Does not mean i am lazy or have no talent i have been playing guitar for 14 years now and have played straight metal before i ended up getting into metalcore and like it alot i like breakdowns i like when the whole band hits on a good beat and i like some more technical stuff that i am recently getting into like ion dissonance.
But everyone has there own likes and dislikes and this was just mine.

holly · Post by **holly** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 10:24 am

chris wrote:I have to say i think that heavy music is just that heavy music weather it be death,black,core,thrash or what ever be that it is not seen like that I myself like metalcore music and that is what my band is and are proud of it. I can very well play straight metal, death or whatever but i choose metalcore cause it's my cup of tea. Does not mean i am lazy or have no talent i have been playing guitar for 14 years now and have played straight metal before i ended up getting into metalcore and like it alot i like breakdowns i like when the whole band hits on a good beat and i like some more technical stuff that i am recently getting into like ion dissonance.
But everyone has there own likes and dislikes and this was just mine.

Dude, they're called periods.
Get into it.

Mike · Post by **Mike** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 10:47 am

holly wrote:
chris wrote:I have to say i think that heavy music is just that heavy music weather it be death,black,core,thrash or what ever be that it is not seen like that I myself like metalcore music and that is what my band is and are proud of it. I can very well play straight metal, death or whatever but i choose metalcore cause it's my cup of tea. Does not mean i am lazy or have no talent i have been playing guitar for 14 years now and have played straight metal before i ended up getting into metalcore and like it alot i like breakdowns i like when the whole band hits on a good beat and i like some more technical stuff that i am recently getting into like ion dissonance.
But everyone has there own likes and dislikes and this was just mine.
Dude, they're called periods.
Get into it.

Yeah that hurt my eyes and head. Comma splices, and/or better spacing might be good too.

And yeah , Ion Dissonance kicks ass.

chris · Post by **chris** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:07 am

O.k. i don't care if i got the periods right or not get over it.

holly · Post by **holly** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:12 am

chris wrote:O.k. i don't care if i got the periods right or not get over it.

I'm being serious.
The way you're writing not only makes it hard to read, it also degrades the meaning of what you are trying to convey.
Some commas wouldn't hurt you, either.

chris · Post by **chris** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:15 am

Cool here are some periods and commas .....................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, put them where they need to be and everything will be alright.

Mike · Post by **Mike** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:16 am

chris wrote:Cool here are some periods and commas .....................................................................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, put them where they need to be and everything will be alright.

Hilarious!

Death2all · Post by **Death2all** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:20 am

This is pointless to argue with these douchbags chris they are never wrong and will not admit it if they are.

holly · Post by **holly** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:22 am

Death2all wrote:This is pointless to argue with these douchbags chris they are never wrong and will not admit it if they are.

You are missing a comma and a period, yourself.

Mike · Post by **Mike** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:23 am

Death2all wrote:This is pointless to argue with these douchbags chris they are never wrong and will not admit it if they are.

Hahahaha. How are we wrong or right? All we said was use a little punctuation, your post is hard to read.
There's nothing to argue about.

Death2all · Post by **Death2all** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:24 am

regardless you got the point thats all that matters.

Mike · Post by **Mike** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:26 am

Death2all wrote:regardless you got the point thats all that matters.

The point barely came across. I agree it doesn't have to be perfect, but I'd say legible is a good thing to shoot for.

holly · Post by **holly** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:27 am

Death2all wrote:regardless you got the point thats all that matters.

Actually, I stopped reading it halfway through because I couldn't stand the fucking run-ons any longer.

chris · Post by **chris** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:31 am

ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!
Can everyone move on already?

Death2all · Post by **Death2all** » Mon September 12th, 2005, 11:33 am

in general jackass not just this thread

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